Te Whare Tapa Wha
Te Whare Tapa Wha is a concept we talk about a lot.
They are the 4 pillars of healthy living - Your physical (taha tinana), your mental (taha hinengaro), your spiritual (taha wairua), and your family/social (taha whanau) wellbeing.
Today we will be focusing on our Taha Hinengaro - Our mental wellbeing.
Today you will be focusing on EXPLANATORY WRITING
Explanatory Writing |
“Hi, my name is Emilio. This lockdown has been really tough. I find myself feeling lazy, and sad a lot of the time. What are some ways I can cheer myself up during lockdown?”
Your task for this piece of writing is to write at least 2 PEEL paragraphs giving Emilio advice on how to look after their mental health during lockdown.
You will need to give at least 2 different pieces of advice, and explain to Emilio how they could go about doing that.
Remember for explanatory writing:
You have organised your ideas into separate paragraphs Your advice is clear, and straightforward - no maybe’s
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PLANNING
Begins on next page
Paragraph One | Paragraph Two |
POINT (One sentence - what should they do?) | Hi my name is Aniqua this lock down has been tough i find myself lazy hungry all the time and hard working | POINT (One sentence - what should they do?) | Once it was level 3 I was excited to go outside somewhere like the beach or something like that. |
EXPLANATION: (Two sentences - what do you mean by that?) | What I mean by that Is i hate staying at home and I just really wanna go outside. | EXPLANATION: (Two sentences - what do you mean by that?) | And maybe get some mcdonald’s kfc as well and eat out somewhere. |
EXAMPLE: (One or two sentences - What does this look like?) | When it raining it's cold and i don't wanna be outside but when its sunny i really wanna be outside | EXAMPLE: (One or two sentences - What does this look like?) | When we go to a place it's a rainy or sunny day. I hate the rain but love the sun. |
LINK: (One sentence - Why will this make them feel better?) | I would really be happy if i could go outside because so i can relax in the sun and be in fresh air | LINK: (One sentence - Why will this make them feel better?) | Do you know what makes me happy? It's food or playing board games with my family. |
Begin your paragraph writing here:Hi my name is Aniqua this lock down has been tough. I find myself lazy, hungry all the time and hard working.What I mean by that Is i hate staying at home and I just really wanna go outside.When it raining it's cold and i don't wanna be outside but when its sunny i really wanna be outside.I would really be happy if i could go outside because so i can relax in the sun and be in fresh air.
Once it was level 3 I was excited to go outside somewhere like the beach or something like that.And maybe get some mcdonald’s kfc as well and eat out somewhere.When we go to a place it's a rainy or sunny day which i hate the rain but love the sun. Do you know what makes me happy? It's food or playing board games with my family.
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